' E, w+ \4 c( h1 `; XWairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 5 H X3 @; R# E9 ^% h朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 % t1 g. A6 _) P2 y5 n5 `舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价!$ A* |" F( U& ?3 h7 ]
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. 9 y$ k+ t* h# d( P联系电话 0210625999: ]; }$ v: N7 Q( z! T ?0 S
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Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 6 Z* }- Z3 x+ K6 e7 M. b- t ~房屋舒适,环境好。整套出租。 * ]9 z( y1 _& A, ?作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-27 14:57:30
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 6 x% g, @ E* G5 W, p" d房屋舒适,环境好。整套出租。4 V8 Y& T6 b; P y3 L 作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-27 23:41:58
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 % K8 `* y% h/ H' M% u房屋舒适,环境好。整套出租。1 C5 e. H! L& V5 a9 r6 L) u 作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-28 14:23:51
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 5 ~8 }9 j: _* _) Y房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年。 - Y! u6 a* a# ]; uThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-28 19:40:06
Wairau Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。8 X- a6 E4 i, d7 t+ c) Y
房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月,可协商。 0 l+ D: _5 B1 Z7 U3 D& fThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-29 13:53:53
Wairau Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。' I$ d7 r$ R3 w, q0 ^
房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月,可协商。' o$ c" s1 d) O: z) ]
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-29 17:20:10
这段英文存在较多语法错误和表达不地道的地方,以下是修改后的版本及解析,使其更符合英语表达习惯和商务沟通的得体性: ) i& P" d3 Q1 z/ Y' v k; C' i5 p/ ~1 ]3 H& A原始错误分析+ y8 y% [8 ^' p5 [3 q, ]
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1. “May I ask u that...”:“u”是不正式的缩写,在正式或商务沟通中应避免;“ask”后接宾语从句时,“that”多余,应去掉 。6 ~' ?# T! t: Y* i, L9 z6 h
, U6 e! U/ N8 T) n2. “on holding to buy my car”:表达错误,正确表达应该是“for holding off on buying my car” ,“hold off”表示“推迟”。 $ ?! b3 P; f" N9 t " F1 I: \: Y2 N' D3. “I can get a new WOF & service for u more safety driving”:句子结构混乱,“more safety driving”表达错误,应该用形容词“safer”修饰“driving”,正确句子可以是“I can get a new WOF and service for you to ensure safer driving”。 $ ?+ i5 _8 v( }& e W2 X & W. |/ P9 _ \7 ?8 }4. “Is this make u happy?”:语法错误,“is”和“make”不能同时使用,应使用助动词“does”构成一般疑问句,即“Does this make you happy?”。 c" ?- J# I) V( a9 \ " F- z: Y/ h0 c. B! p% N8 e9 f
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Good afternoon. May I ask if there's any reason you're holding off on buying my car? I was thinking that I could get a new WOF and service it for you to ensure safer driving. Would this be appealing to you? ' e9 U4 R" @% `* O$ O6 ]2 a 9 ^5 }) \* S7 c版本说明" }% Q2 W" p1 l0 A
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1. 整体更自然流畅:使用了更符合日常英语表达习惯的句式,如“May I ask if...” ,“holding off on...” 。8 t5 J! \3 U: z& \
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2. 更礼貌得体:“Would this be appealing to you?” 比原句“Is this make u happy?” 更礼貌、专业,也更符合商务沟通场景。作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-30 11:24:33
+ q# K4 u5 s2 |1 w1 @Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 8 a# K8 Y* o* \9 k6 ^房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 2 m3 ~9 O7 R: lThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-30 20:14:04
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 % b5 T# H: k5 C5 h房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。# B/ B6 W" J; S4 B3 N4 ^, t
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-1 10:17:01
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。7 n. ~# @: B6 L1 {
房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 : s: B( y) M/ o+ hThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-1 14:02:53
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 5 H+ w# V1 ^% U" a3 | P$ q% H) t房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 / r3 d. g! w/ xThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-1 14:14:48
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Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 / X& X% S. A( \8 W) I9 ^/ {房屋舒适,环境好。. f+ D! q+ F6 E8 l! a
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-2 07:26:14
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空房整租半年到9个月! 2 n6 {' W. y$ L7 h% q/ o" c绝对舒适,绝对优惠!9 n9 x+ h% i# q7 V
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 3 `. H6 Q {8 M5 ?# Z. N房屋舒适,环境好。! Y h9 s$ D- ]5 N5 E0 B; N3 D1 H
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-2 18:43:37
空房整租半年到9个月! 7 r' W, \4 ]+ w: K/ U/ @- i$ ?绝对舒适,绝对优惠!) X' x6 y; D8 }
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 * y, W9 ^5 I5 D7 }0 o4 d房屋舒适,环境好。 $ W6 h- `8 v7 [ q. L, y+ J$ S6 mThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-3 20:41:57
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 - S9 i" f* S( T0 w, Y y$ A朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 ( O* I, T) L! a# s3 b& Q, {. o- i舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价! , i( n+ ?* e. S, cThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. p- `1 ^. {. ^$ R7 C# {
联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-8 10:21:33
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。% ^2 {/ L/ A [4 I9 I% g
朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-8 10:21:36
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 / p5 D7 |* l Q$ _; n# _5 v朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-8 15:55:15
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。$ w7 U7 f9 p& w" Z1 ^( A
朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。: W( g& d: J9 B$ Q) ^
舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价! 5 R+ i/ x5 ]0 `# yThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. ) g0 k: V& a! p1 c) n3 b$ e: d+ @联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-8 22:49:04
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。- n/ H2 E# L) x2 A, W
朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。* @* d$ M4 f: D4 L# B+ ^
舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价!作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-9 07:32:21
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 1 e' F' z0 w; k) ~) {/ W朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 & Z" R( [% Y1 X' V I% _7 ?舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价! 0 v- s/ ?5 W. _, d8 Q( w/ kThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.$ j6 [6 }" G- c6 ]5 ]
联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-9 14:21:20
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。2 [' P5 ?8 e1 l0 L' O
朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 4 d/ H% o- ~3 H舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价!( B5 r& j1 Z, z7 I% Q
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. @9 h, c7 s9 x6 [1 D: u
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愿神赐福群里的每一位母亲![合十][合十][合十] [爱心][爱心][爱心] ; D5 @! M/ A3 i O# i6 [; m) i㊗️ 妈妈们节日快乐![庆祝][太阳][玫瑰][礼物][蛋糕][跳跳][转圈]作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-14 13:31:37
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Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 , c9 i" ^ d- ~6 L8 H朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 6 ~4 i, N1 u7 @) |7 E舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价! * b( m* ?$ ~( x# ^( a* E8 Z& E8 nThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.% p( H& e6 F4 I' p! A3 B5 O! Q4 t
联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-16 06:28:06
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Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 1 b1 s1 H! K" m3 b' W% I# |8 E朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。" [/ ~: Y, ^" q( r. z, p
舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价! 2 i/ J7 F/ J- J+ x! \9 M( UThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.# A' Z7 O" D0 c- s" r7 z2 r6 Y
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/ T- a( E5 a5 k0 j2 U2 O& ^Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 $ o, I/ L; q' F- y1 Y朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。; a0 f* o2 S" n; C0 s
舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价! 9 z8 s! [ j5 B iThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. / s! }& ~( l) C, Z联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-19 09:10:38