本帖最后由 爱美丽的小肥猫 于 2025-5-29 18:01 编辑 9 n0 ?# |3 @' m- O' b% @ / W2 I5 m% {) pWairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。" Y& b) b& r" r; v% |# `8 t
朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。0 S$ \0 c6 T8 w0 y, k9 V h
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This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. 9 ?& }5 E- B7 o9 `2 B8 t; }: n联系电话 0210625999 $ V9 v$ a H' g3 ^3 z# o" r * ?# y7 C% {% L+ Y
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 7 f! ~* n* b) R房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年。 - g1 N9 U6 |2 o% SThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-28 19:40:06
Wairau Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。' q) K# _( g6 m; L
房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月,可协商。 9 P- c$ R! _- T0 @This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-29 13:53:53
Wairau Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 j1 J& v5 T6 O* _9 C房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月,可协商。! U/ S0 G4 K/ t, k0 n
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-29 17:20:10
这段英文存在较多语法错误和表达不地道的地方,以下是修改后的版本及解析,使其更符合英语表达习惯和商务沟通的得体性: - a+ y, n1 @8 I6 g" K : {1 H/ M7 J, ?0 ]2 }原始错误分析) X( O& Y0 ~3 g. {/ W# M
) y! j3 m8 O7 A5 n j, D: ^2 P1. “May I ask u that...”:“u”是不正式的缩写,在正式或商务沟通中应避免;“ask”后接宾语从句时,“that”多余,应去掉 。 1 [7 X2 u$ d+ I % W4 Y4 U' |9 l
2. “on holding to buy my car”:表达错误,正确表达应该是“for holding off on buying my car” ,“hold off”表示“推迟”。 ! Z5 X5 H4 F ^3 L% P 7 C: d$ C5 p( T/ d+ g) O' ^* {3. “I can get a new WOF & service for u more safety driving”:句子结构混乱,“more safety driving”表达错误,应该用形容词“safer”修饰“driving”,正确句子可以是“I can get a new WOF and service for you to ensure safer driving”。. m: M) V0 K _' ]
( h( Y: a7 U1 u. e6 L; y2 j3 F4. “Is this make u happy?”:语法错误,“is”和“make”不能同时使用,应使用助动词“does”构成一般疑问句,即“Does this make you happy?”。% z9 d6 Y8 e/ ^) C# r8 d; x
7 j7 u* T' Z. L2 x修改后的版本 : i& a2 p5 v' Q- p" b $ I" ?% I" W; Z' q# [6 LGood afternoon. May I ask if there's any reason you're holding off on buying my car? I was thinking that I could get a new WOF and service it for you to ensure safer driving. Would this be appealing to you?% w/ t: M8 ~9 b# r
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1. 整体更自然流畅:使用了更符合日常英语表达习惯的句式,如“May I ask if...” ,“holding off on...” 。* c# D t6 D+ H2 Y
8 _( [1 n+ a% c9 Q2. 更礼貌得体:“Would this be appealing to you?” 比原句“Is this make u happy?” 更礼貌、专业,也更符合商务沟通场景。作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-30 11:24:33
6 D7 T! P# q) D8 K$ b/ DWairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。! _; x) ?) O1 R! A
房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。) r( @7 d) K0 z8 ?+ b+ [
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-4-30 20:14:04
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 ]5 `" i; _2 K房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。8 Q! g. i( D4 W
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-1 10:17:01
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。2 E$ b* X! O0 |+ ^
房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。) Z& \( P: h( j6 H, g2 M+ l
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-1 14:02:53
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 / U5 O! G/ `; x O. Q3 V: i3 Z房屋舒适,环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 ( `9 g, p7 W& ?6 O' sThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-1 14:14:48
空房整租半年到9个月! ) G) U: ~4 [/ Z绝对舒适,绝对优惠!, H: Y2 U) Q) a% K/ V, V
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 2 U, e# U; L @7 w房屋舒适,环境好。& j" |* G L! X( s
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-2 07:26:14
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空房整租半年到9个月! ' C* @. q6 c$ N5 ?* ^绝对舒适,绝对优惠! " n H `% d8 U7 wWairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 4 b1 i' H1 S' G8 @! a1 L* e( X房屋舒适,环境好。/ m8 ^1 j) v3 N" I! C1 L1 T
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-2 18:43:37
空房整租半年到9个月!( e/ h, _& V8 {. R( X( D2 O, `
绝对舒适,绝对优惠!# E5 |; d! a$ \. ], a
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。# M" L, J$ L, l/ R8 v5 o
房屋舒适,环境好。6 J9 V# y4 A, r. B8 ~: |9 K
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-3 20:41:57
爱美丽的小肥猫 发表于 2025-5-2 07:26 8 ~$ R3 K+ m$ c r6 q Y
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Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。* I/ D2 B; \) @; _# S
朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。& z, I' Y t/ G, R
舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价! ' t! y% D$ c+ N$ {, v& P* f! E3 HThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.1 H. b. D! ?, ^* r% ]) A
联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-8 10:21:33
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 ( U' {! n, y3 m+ q- ^ E+ f朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-8 10:21:36
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。9 D% D8 u& i2 S9 }% m/ o. u+ O
朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-8 15:55:15
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。9 z5 j& q7 m, Y& C6 \* \7 T' c7 }
朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 ( W ~1 k6 a6 m# t& z7 ?7 I舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价! % y9 J- r4 C; mThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. , C& b. m E g# T6 N& s" A# c联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-8 22:49:04
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 ( l. B# i+ M' _) A4 k7 w: `' Q Y朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。8 n' ~$ A, E% C( ] ~& L
舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价!作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-9 07:32:21
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 ' V2 X8 l( Q/ {" Z; }朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。6 H# ?( K) b- @* ^$ y, h8 M
舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价!+ w+ t; W Y2 p4 ~
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.. Y: I/ e( s4 e# k, \
联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-9 14:21:20
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 8 D* F4 n$ b0 L+ l3 c2 q6 X! P朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 + B% W0 \' e! I2 W8 @4 |舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价!( z- Z* r" c3 u* K" P- `7 N2 W
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. + L2 b+ i5 S" c) q& R, e联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-11 11:42:58
本帖最后由 爱美丽的小肥猫 于 2025-5-14 09:29 编辑 {% j* m n5 `5 S $ ?; h5 z' ]# Y2 t" E1 T: N& T) n- i, ]. t4 }9 n
Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。 a9 @4 P6 ^# t3 E朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。. @- S1 P+ X- Y4 V( i3 e4 J/ R
舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价! 8 s; A, i3 U f0 }4 M8 m) K* l3 WThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. ' \/ f- O- O2 Y+ R7 v, z联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-16 06:28:06
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Wairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。% h1 z' U5 X2 E' i( K& K8 t
朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。6 s W! _, a6 s" I d+ [+ G
舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价!: L: v" {" X1 g3 J* z8 ?% b7 |
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. ' r& Y( y$ F1 d$ X3 l联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-16 15:54:29
' E8 |1 g; M3 Y( ZWairu Park 独立house,三卧室,一个卫生间,近paknsave, 和华人超市,近高速。; ?" D# r$ m1 m' Q) s- d
朋友圈朋友亲情价,市场最优惠,空房整租半年到9个月。 $ f# p1 R& n8 D& P9 w* h5 b9 T, E% q舒适的房屋,绝对优惠价!& e/ k' O& s7 K' }
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids. 2 U$ z% X, }0 b; T3 V' Y n联系电话 0210625999作者: 爱美丽的小肥猫 时间: 2025-5-19 09:10:38