Glenfield，3房1卫，独立house整租半年到9个月

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Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月。
3 w8 _& m5 D/ U1 M; ^9 p# M舒适的房屋，绝对优惠价！
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.​
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爱美丽的小肥猫

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Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
房屋舒适，环境好。整套出租。

爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
房屋舒适，环境好。整套出租。
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爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
9 ^7 B( r% g/ ^4 }  H" ?房屋舒适，环境好。整套出租。
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爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
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% x  b- u/ Z" l7 |2 w# W* j$ CThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.​

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18 Hatherlow Street. Wairau park

爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairau Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
房屋舒适，环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月，可协商。
. R/ c; D9 j# F3 ~) c% S5 N$ _This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.​

爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairau Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
# A, v3 a$ X3 }% Q  w房屋舒适，环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月，可协商。
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.​

爱美丽的小肥猫

这段英文存在较多语法错误和表达不地道的地方，以下是修改后的版本及解析，使其更符合英语表达习惯和商务沟通的得体性：

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( m$ K% }; R/ o" p, m1. “May I ask u that...”：“u”是不正式的缩写，在正式或商务沟通中应避免；“ask”后接宾语从句时，“that”多余，应去掉 。

2. “on holding to buy my car”：表达错误，正确表达应该是“for holding off on buying my car” ，“hold off”表示“推迟”。

* m9 m. D+ `1 u: D9 g) c8 N3. “I can get a new WOF & service for u more safety driving”：句子结构混乱，“more safety driving”表达错误，应该用形容词“safer”修饰“driving”，正确句子可以是“I can get a new WOF and service for you to ensure safer driving”。
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4. “Is this make u happy?”：语法错误，“is”和“make”不能同时使用，应使用助动词“does”构成一般疑问句，即“Does this make you happy?”。
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Good afternoon. May I ask if there's any reason you're holding off on buying my car? I was thinking that I could get a new WOF and service it for you to ensure safer driving. Would this be appealing to you?

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1. 整体更自然流畅：使用了更符合日常英语表达习惯的句式，如“May I ask if...” ，“holding off on...” 。
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& z* r8 F+ g: v: M% V2. 更礼貌得体：“Would this be appealing to you?” 比原句“Is this make u happy?” 更礼貌、专业，也更符合商务沟通场景。

爱美丽的小肥猫

6 x6 c) G% G' p/ U. a# @Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
房屋舒适，环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月。
8 U0 L' e% W- Q: v8 {  I* nThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.

爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
. M* u: N" A; i; k6 o7 ~房屋舒适，环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月。
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.

爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
房屋舒适，环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月。
# _3 V- C  \7 X7 UThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.

爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
* M, ]( J2 y1 N: v房屋舒适，环境好。朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月。
$ i, |/ V- g) U  y; ?& w* X& {This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.

爱美丽的小肥猫

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房屋舒适，环境好。
0 }9 |) \, H! g& k' g& v9 ~This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.

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空房整租半年到9个月！
绝对舒适，绝对优惠！
Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
" \% x+ T3 |% D( j3 m房屋舒适，环境好。
* H) G. z4 ?1 B- i7 v5 T$ r' |/ O6 lThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.

爱美丽的小肥猫

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9 `% K2 I. W& UWairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
房屋舒适，环境好。
( z  I" [( N+ R: q2 k6 EThis warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.

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爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月。
舒适的房屋，绝对优惠价！
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.​
联系电话 0210625999

爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月。

爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
- s  S0 @) g8 `朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月。

爱美丽的小肥猫

Wairu Park 独立house，三卧室，一个卫生间，近paknsave, 和华人超市，近高速。
朋友圈朋友亲情价，市场最优惠，空房整租半年到9个月。
舒适的房屋，绝对优惠价！
This warm and inviting 3-bedroom home features a modern kitchen, spacious living area, well-appointed family bathroom, and separate laundry. Step outside to a sunny deck and private, fully fenced backyard-ideal for morning coffee, weekend BBQs, and a safe play space for kids.​
联系电话 0210625999